07-23-2013, 01:01 PM
Well, I will certainly not criticize your Latin,because I'm the last one who should do it .To me your brief article was an interesting snapshot to an area I don't know much in detail,because my focus usually shift heavyly on east after Aetius death.So every information I can get on the situation during closing years of the Western Empire is much valuable.
The only objection that I had relates with what somebody already mentioned here-while reading it I was not sure what the goal or a point of the artycle is.Personally I also think that this might work better if individual thematic paragraphs would by highlighted by subtitle,like for example in the final paragraph something like:Situation of the Frontier in the closing years of the West,etc...
You should maybe also post your work at http://www.academia.edu/ ,if you already not done so.Even I got my profile there,but to date,not even one article illy: .
The only objection that I had relates with what somebody already mentioned here-while reading it I was not sure what the goal or a point of the artycle is.Personally I also think that this might work better if individual thematic paragraphs would by highlighted by subtitle,like for example in the final paragraph something like:Situation of the Frontier in the closing years of the West,etc...
You should maybe also post your work at http://www.academia.edu/ ,if you already not done so.Even I got my profile there,but to date,not even one article illy: .