04-04-2010, 01:16 PM
I've just read your first book in the series about about tribulus. Like it a lot!
Excellent advice on point of view, although personnally I will live with it if an author does it in a good story, as I am fairly laid back, but it can be a major irritation. It can also help to add to the tension if done right, but usually, I get a bit miffed... :lol:
Excellent advice on point of view, although personnally I will live with it if an author does it in a good story, as I am fairly laid back, but it can be a major irritation. It can also help to add to the tension if done right, but usually, I get a bit miffed... :lol:
Visne partem mei capere? Comminus agamus! * Me semper rogo, Quid faceret Iulius Caesar? * Confidence is a good thing! Overconfidence is too much of a good thing.
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[b]Legio XIIII GMV. (Q. Magivs)RMRS Remember Atuatuca! Vengence will be ours!
Titus Flavius Germanus
Batavian Coh I
Byron Angel
