12-04-2010, 12:06 PM
Just the odd little things, and a few chronological discrepancies wit hthe major characters,(which he admits to).
i would have to go back and readthe beginning again to give you a detailed report... oops:
i would have to go back and readthe beginning again to give you a detailed report... oops:
Visne partem mei capere? Comminus agamus! * Me semper rogo, Quid faceret Iulius Caesar? * Confidence is a good thing! Overconfidence is too much of a good thing.
[b]Legio XIIII GMV. (Q. Magivs)RMRS Remember Atuatuca! Vengence will be ours!
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Batavian Coh I
Byron Angel
[b]Legio XIIII GMV. (Q. Magivs)RMRS Remember Atuatuca! Vengence will be ours!
Titus Flavius Germanus
Batavian Coh I
Byron Angel