07-20-2009, 08:09 PM
Really nice landing page. The graphics are great and it presents as a very professional publication. The form is clearly set out and looks easy to use.
Just 2 points I'd look at, maybe a different strap line, 'Take it for a spin' is a phrase I'd just associate with buying a car.
Do you have a sentance for why people would subscribe to the magazine anyway? Something such as 'Ancient warfare Magazine, step back into the time of heroes' (just an example, not one I'd use!) and then below this 'Trial Subsrciption Offer' That way you're always reminding people of why they should get copies.
Also 'Submission subject to approval.' The way it's worded does make it seem as if the subscribers have to wait and see if you'll accept their money.
Hope this helps
Just 2 points I'd look at, maybe a different strap line, 'Take it for a spin' is a phrase I'd just associate with buying a car.
Do you have a sentance for why people would subscribe to the magazine anyway? Something such as 'Ancient warfare Magazine, step back into the time of heroes' (just an example, not one I'd use!) and then below this 'Trial Subsrciption Offer' That way you're always reminding people of why they should get copies.
Also 'Submission subject to approval.' The way it's worded does make it seem as if the subscribers have to wait and see if you'll accept their money.
Hope this helps
Lawrence Payne
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